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Post by Silvertips on Jan 18, 2013 11:18:40 GMT -6
 Does this help? If you can't read my writing let me know |
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Post by Silvertips on Jan 18, 2013 11:28:00 GMT -6
 I think the nose and mouth are just a little off on this one. I think it also feels a little un balanced - theres a lot more going on on the right. |
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Post by niceguyanimefan on Jan 18, 2013 15:51:17 GMT -6
i agree with one part being really busy and the other side being a bit empty. if you can add more to balance it out i would.
but wow. so much is going on. you're going for surrealism, right? or something along those lines?
wish i could be more of use but you;re better than me and i do a different type of art. but man i just get lost in those eyes.
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Post by niceguyanimefan on Jan 18, 2013 15:55:05 GMT -6
i can read your penmanship no problem. its better than mine(smily face) i kind of already posted a long reply on DA to the comment you left before i made this account. but in the future i will do it here. overall: i am grateful. its a lot of help. just a few parts are nuances or intentionally incorrect. if anyone else has ideas too that would be great. original here: niceguyanimefan.deviantart.com/#/d5rt00q |
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Post by Silvertips on Jan 18, 2013 16:30:26 GMT -6
You're right the arms weren't wrong the way you positioned them, I just drew them in a way that felt a little more natural. I do think they needed to be a little longer but they're pretty much right. Again this is just my preference since with anime hair kinda defies gravity anyway lol I really doubt its because of the giant boobs that people download your pictures. It might be and some of them probably are but just because your picture has "OMG BOOBS!" doesn't mean thats all guys are going to look at. Drawing boobs right doesn't make you a pervert. Even if all you draw is naked girls running around with GGGs it still doesn't make you a pervert, probably just horny. The boobs you put on your characters are saggy old lady boobs, teenage boobs don't usually hang flat like that. I don't know if you watch/read Bleach but Orihime Inoue has sizeable breasts and they still look like big round domes. The girls you draw look like they are always freezing cold and have national geographic sized nipples. Again that could be a style choice and thats fine but normally boobs don't look like that. Nipples are also usually on the front center of boobs not sticking off the sides. Its really rough but this is your typical lady body  No problem, thats what were here for - to help each other learn and since we all draw I figure having a visual for what could be done to help a piece is always nice. |
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Post by niceguyanimefan on Jan 18, 2013 16:49:28 GMT -6
i am not kidding when i say thats all guys focus on. i catch guys doing it! in person! then they like grab my sketchbook adn look at it then girls walk by and derisively stare at me.
yes i do them older-lady but often its cuz they are. like i dotn know what else to say. and yes i am not going for 100% real. i kinda like the way i do them. hmm. gonna have to think about doing it differently.
also: bleach is famous for terrible b*****s. its like mocked beyond belief for being an example of what not to do.
"freezing cold?" where did that come from? like do they look cold?
and thanks again
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Post by Silvertips on Jan 23, 2013 10:19:50 GMT -6
 I think your bird needs to be more feathery and less furry looking. I do think you've got a good shape for him though. |
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